Monday, September 26, 2016
Literary Device Admiration: The Color of Water
One literary device I noticed the author uses very well and very often is flashback. The author alternates between two different perspectives in two different time periods. One of the two views in the book is from a young James McBride's standpoint and the other is his mother's perspective during her childhood. The author uses the flashbacks to his mother's past whereas in his own childhood he knew none of his mother's history. He emphasizes how secretive his mother is using dialogue between the two, "As a boy I never knew where my mother was from-where she was born, who her parents were. When I asked she'd say "God made me." When I asked if she was white, she'd say, "I'm light skinned,"and change the subject. It creates dramatic irony because I know information and experiences from the mother's past while young James knows nothing. Reading about the mother's childhood puts a lot of things she does as a mother into perspective. For example their mother loves Christianity and influences it onto her children. As a child her father was a Jewish rabbi(which James doesn't know yet) and his unloving ways made the Jewish religion have a bad connotation for her, as it always reminded her of her dad. I think that's why she believes in Christianity so deeply, because it is how she found herself and a passion she never had growing up. I could use flashbacks in my own writing in addition to imagery because there are parts of my childhood that I remember in extreme detail that no one knows about. There are pieces of my childhood that played a huge role in me being who I am and describing that in such detail would add the characterization and clarity for the readers as it does for me in this book. The flashbacks and change of perspective fills in the blanks for me as I read because strictly from James's point of view the story is more vague because he doesn't know much yet. One of the my favorite, and most surprising and eye opening quote from his mother's past is "...but to be honest with you, I used to see that empty chair we left for Elijah at the table and wish I could be gone to wherever Elijah was, eating over somebody's house where your father didn't crawl into bed with you at night, interrupting your dreams so you don't know if it's really him or just the same nightmare happening over and over again." This quote was so shocking to me and I feel sympathy for the mother. It made me understand why she was so resistant to sharing her past. It's not a casual story you tell a nine year old over breakfast in the morning.
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You are highly skilled at analysis of author's craft. Sentences such as, "He emphasizes how secretive his mother is using dialogue between the two..." and "It creates dramatic irony because I know information and experiences from the mother's past while young James knows nothing" are perfect examples of your insight and attention to HOW an author achieves a particular effect.
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ReplyDeleteI really like how specific you are. You are so clear I have no problem understanding it. I enjoy how you show you how you feel and connect to the book. "...but to be honest with you, I used to see that empty chair we left for Elijah at the table and wish I could be gone to wherever Elijah was, eating over somebody's house where your father didn't crawl into bed with you at night, interrupting your dreams so you don't know if it's really him or just the same nightmare happening over and over again." This quote was so shocking to me and I feel sympathy for the mother. that was a great example on how you connected.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you described specifically how the author used the literary device. I especially liked how she compared how the author used this literary device and how she is planning on combining the author's technique and with her own in her memoir.I also really liked how she compared it to her own life, which in any writing draws in the reader and shows that it could happen to anyone.
ReplyDeleteThis really helped me see how flashbacks allow the author to weave two incomplete stories into one whole. This could work really well to help combine an event that I can't remember much about with one that I remember in vivid detail. Flashbacks and descriptive language seem to go well together to create interesting and powerful stories.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked how you typed out some of the flashbacks and included them in your response. It helped me visualize your response and really understand what you were talking about throughout your response. I think anyone who reads the book knows that the author uses flashbacks a lot, and this really helps accentuate the book, and you are able to understand the author's mom and her past.
Great Job!