Sunday, October 2, 2016

Reflections on Writing Memoir- The Color of Water

In my book the author uses two perspectives. The reason I think he decided to do this was because there were a lot of blanks and disconnections from his point of view that didn't explain the story very clearly. I think a trouble he might've faced was remembering details and portraying the story in an interesting. As the book progressed James's personal story became more interesting but their was an underlying factor that was missing. His mother's life was such a huge part of his own because she was his only parent. Many parts of his life was always intertwined with his's mothers. He may have struggled to put his story together on its own. To make the reader more divulged into his world he chose to add letters from his mother that was given to him. It would better capture the overall feeling of the events since it was written and you can feel the emotions in the words. It seems like a common issue that would occur when writing a memoir is remembering the little things that built upon each other. James was lucky to have his mom's letters to aid him and find a way to connect it to his own. I am fairly confident in my memory of events that happened, but I think I may struggle to add the emotional factor to my writing. I want the reader to be able to feel the journey of my life as if they were experiencing it also, but I think that will be very challenging for me. I worry I won't be able to portray it in such a mellifluous way that I've other authors do. I know some memoir writers might have problems finding an interesting part of their life to write about. In 9th grade some people haven't had huge experiences or events that they would find worth writing about. I think in my memoir I'm going to have to bring out the little moments that people over look but can make a world of difference,

4 comments:

  1. I really liked how you continually compare this memoir to your life. I admire how you are always looking for stuff to use in your memoir. I also admire how you brought up a really good point, that I think almost everyone our age has trouble with, remembering exactly what happened or how you felt at this age especially since we barely know what we feel.

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  2. I liked how you said that you wanted the author to feel the journey of your life as if it was happening to them. I also want this for my memoir. James McBride (the author of the Color of Water) did such a great job of this throughout the book, and this made you very interested in the book. You also said that you are going to include little moments that people overlook in your memoir, and I liked this because you honestly never know what things have the ability to inspire people and change their life.

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  3. This is really deep. There is so much great stuff you mentioned. Both the emotional aspect of writing a memoir and the little moments that make a big difference I would overlook, and would probably be overlooked by most people. I think emotion is what lets people connect to a memoir and makes that memoir feel personal. If the reader can emotionally connect to the memoir, it makes it so much more interesting to read.

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  4. It's true. It's hard to remember the little details. Memory is truly a funny thing. Sometimes I talk to my parents of what happened and they have a totally different story than I do. I guess it's hard for the reader to know if the memory is reliable. Yeah I think authors make a lot of things up because they can't remember every detail, but I guess it's ok as long as its nothing to crazy and drastic and it sticks to what your main theme it. I'm sure you'll be able to capture some of your emotions on pen and paper when you get started.

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